I think the drawing is amazing, but you should take the text off. The drawing looks stunning but the text makes it look like the cover of a romance novel or something, you know?
I knew the text looks very annoying...however, I can't think of another way to acknowledge the artists. If it were only myself it would be easier, but there is another one involved in this case,
That's true. If the text bothers you maybe you could try using a font and colors that were more discrete? maybe if it was grey or something. or if the text was smaller. The Drawing IS stunning tough